RE: Weak In My Own Weakness

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Very well written. You really drew me in. A life of not measuring up through no fault of your own; what an awful experience to endure. I love that you drew on your own life experience as the basis for your story. It made it feel that more relatable and personal. I could feel your connection to your MC. I particularly enjoyed the power of your ending, "I had been too weak in my own weakness." How ironic that the one weakness your MC did possess was the one that ultimately saved him.


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Wow, you accord me too much credit.

A life of not measuring up through no fault of your own
We sometimes have to pay for the things we have little or no idea about. That's life.

I love that you drew on your own life experience as the basis for your story. It made it feel that more relatable and personal. I could feel your connection to your MC

That was the only way I could really express the pain that he felt, he was me in so many ways. I'm glad I was able to draw you into how I've felt almost all my life.

I particularly enjoyed the power of your ending, "I had been too weak in my own weakness." How ironic that the one weakness your MC did possess was the one that ultimately saved him.

I'm glad you did @samsmith1971, thank you for taking time to read this and leave an amazing comment

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You are very welcome. I hope you do well again in the contest this week my friend. Regular writing is doing wonders for all of us and it is plain to see in your posts these days :-)

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I hope I also do well but if I don't it doesn't mean I'll give up. The aim is to get to the top 3 atleast once before the year runs out. I hope I achieve that.

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