RE: Weak In My Own Weakness
Very well written. You really drew me in. A life of not measuring up through no fault of your own; what an awful experience to endure. I love that you drew on your own life experience as the basis for your story. It made it feel that more relatable and personal. I could feel your connection to your MC. I particularly enjoyed the power of your ending, "I had been too weak in my own weakness." How ironic that the one weakness your MC did possess was the one that ultimately saved him.